Brief Description

        Students compose a persuasive essay based on research data as well as their personal experiences and views related to their country of origin.

Technology Standards

Academic Standards Concepts and Generalizations
Notwithstanding the students’ beginning level of English language proficiency or even complete illiteracy, they all take AIMS, that is write a persuasive essay for the writing portion of the test. To train them for the test, the teacher instructs the class in test-taking strategies and main components of a persuasive essay.  It is a lengthy and elaborate process that leads students through a mini-research whose product is a high-level essay.  It is the first research project SEI beginner students accomplish in an American high school, so it calls for detailed instruction and guidance in every step of Internet research and writing itself.  The majority of SEI students come from Mexico, hence the title of the lesson.  The focus on the country of origin enables the students who are very recent immigrants to express themselves, to vocalize their concerns of the culture shock they are experiencing and validate their feelings towards their home countries.
 

Objectives

Academic

Technological Pre-Requisite Technology Skills
  • Using Internet search engines.
  • Word processing.
  • Presentation tools.
  • Materials Lesson Differentiation
    Strategies
    Varied pacing; student-teacher goal setting; varied scaffolding; use of cooperation, collaboration and independence; community mentorship; explorations by interest.
    This lesson differentiates What? This lesson differentiates How?
    Procedures
    1.  Students are introduced to a Persuasive Essay Outline.    The teacher explains the following denominators of the essay structure:  outline, persuade, persuasive, paragraph, thesis, supporting details, argument, opinion, fact, supporting evidence, acknowledge, opponent, viewpoint, point of view, reinforce, restate, wording, paraphrase, etc.

    2.  The class collectively decides on a topic and votes for a thesis. The teacher guides students through the outline and the essay itself as necessary, providing individual help to students of a lower RIT Range.

    3.  Students brainstorm what issues related to their countries of origin can be a topic of a persuasive essay and develop a thesis of their own persuasive essay.  The teacher observes the students' efforts and makes a decision which students should be offered the template of the essay or a helpful website address that helps them create the argument.    Illiterate students work with a mentor that takes notes of their ideas and helps to copy them in a word processing document.  Further, he guides them through the Internet sites where they draw for information from visual images mostly or listen to the tutor as he reads out loud.

    4.  Students search for supporting evidence that would validate their opinions using the following Internet sites:

    http://www.elbalero.gob.mx/index_kids.html Mexican Government site for students
    http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/ Mexico  Encyclopedia of Mexico
    http://www.public.iastate.edu/~rjsalvad/scmfaq/scmfaq.html Culture and Society of Mexico

    http://www.cia.gov/cia/publications/factbook/geos/vm.html  -- CIA book of facts on Vietnam
    http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vietnam  Encyclopedia of Vietnam

    http://www.cia.gov/cia/publications/factbook/geos/ch.html  CIA book of facts on China
    http://pasture.ecn.purdue.edu/~agenhtml/agenmc/china/china.html  Art of China
    http://chineseculture.about.com/  Culture of China

    http://www.cia.gov/cia/publications/factbook/geos/ke.html  CIA book of facts on Kenya
    http://www.kenya.de/

    5.  Students are instructed in ways to process the discovered data:
    • how to select relevant facts;
    • how to create a table and insert pertinent data;
    • how to refer to the source and compile a bibliography;
    • how to avoid plagiarism;
    • how to summarize the information;
    • how to accurately paraphrase sentences;
    • how to identify facts and distinguish them from opinions;
    • how to differentiate between reliable data and scam, fraud and myth, etc.
    6.  Students include the results of their Internet research into their essays.  The teacher instructs students to thoroughly select the data from the abundant information that they discover on the Internet, and insert only the most accurate and relevant statements.

    7.  Students present their projects in a way they choose: create a Power Point, have a discussion, make a poster, etc.

    Assessment
    The final product is the persuasive essay that is assessed on the 6 Traits Rubric for Conventions, Organization, Ideas and Content, Sentence Fluency and Voice, as defined by the Arizona Department of Education at  http://www.ade.az.gov/sbtl/6traits/6traits.pdf.  This particular assessment instrument is selected in order to make it as similar as possible to the AIMS requirements.
    Teacher Name:  Katherine Engel
    Email:  kengel@amphi.com
    Site:  Amphitheater High School
    Date Submitted:  2-14-2005