Brief Description
Students have been exposed
to a variety of authors and writing styles throughout the semester. Additionally,
we have examined the components needed to write creative stories and now
they have the opportunity to create a story on their own. Students may
have their stories published on the Internet if they have permission to
do so. This lesson will vary in length depending on the individual writing
styles, abilities, prompts used, and access to computers when it is time
to submit stories. Six to ten one- hour lessons should provide adequate
time. Lessons include time to web and plan ideas, draft(s), edit and revise,
and typing the final copy for either the class or for submission to the
Internet.
Standards and Frameworks
Technology Standards
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1T-E1. Communicate about technology
using developmentally appropriate and accurate terminology
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1T-E2. Demonstrate increasingly
sophisticated operation of technology components
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3T-E1. Use formatting capabilities
of technology tools for communicating and illustrating
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3T-E3. Publish and present information
using technology tools
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4T-E2. Use technology tools for
individual and collaborative writing, communication and publishing activities
to create curricular related products for audiences inside and outside
the classroom
Academic Standards
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W-E1.Use correct spelling, punctuation,
capitalization, grammar and usage, along with varied sentence structure
and paragraph organization, to complete effectively a variety of writing
tasks
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W-E2.Write a personal experience
narrative or creative story that includes a plot and shows the reader what
happens through well-developed characters, setting, dialog, and themes
and uses figurative language, descriptive words and phrases
Objectives
Academic
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Using the Kidspiration program,
or alternative web designs, students will web their ideas. Their web should
include story elements. (idea or title, characters, setting, beginning,
middle, end, problem and a solution).
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Using a Word document, students
will write, revise, and edit their own story.
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Students will self-edit using
their six-traits rubric-see attached.
Technological
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Using Microsoft Word, students
will write the final draft of their story, with minimal errors in formatting,
spelling, and sentence formation.
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Using the Internet, students will
access and read stories written by other children. Then, using a rubric-scoring
sheet, students will assess the story they have read prior to writing their
own and include a short narrative describing the strengths/weaknesses of
the piece.
Pre-Requisite Technology Skills
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Students will need to be able
to type, edit and save work to their disk/server.
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Students will need to have appropriate
permission to access the Internet and to publish their work following school/district
guidelines.
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Students know how to send and
receive e-mail at the teacher’s e-mail address.
Materials
Students may need their six
traits writing rubric to assess their work
A thesaurus and dictionary
may be helpful tools
Computer with Microsoft Word
(or alternative word processing document) and access to the Internet
Kidspiration (or alternative)
webbing program
Accommodations for Special
Needs
Gifted students – This
lesson allows students to be creative in their thinking as they create
their own story. Extensions for advanced writers may involve writing to
correlate with ongoing class-work or to meet other requirements such as
Odyssey of the Mind or chronicles they are writing related to the Jason
Project at http://www.jasonproject.org
If they finish early,
as some do, they may have the option of helping another student with the
writing or technology process, or they may include illustrations with their
story.
SEI (Sheltered English Immersion)
students – students may be paired up with another student and write the
story together. They will be given the opportunity to read with someone
else, as well as write with another student. They should be given
the opportunity to type some of the story from the rough draft, and learn
how to save on a disk. Additionally, students may need to write in their
home language during early drafts. They may also use recorders to tell
their story prior to trying to write.
ADD/ADHD students –
Break down the task. Have students write or draw parts of the story.
Students can use headphones to help block out distractions. Instead
of writing a rough draft students may want to tell it into a recorder first,
then listen and write it down.
Special Education students
– Break down the task. When writing the story, have the student list what
happened first, second, third, or have them record it in a tape recorder
and have one of the "computer-literate" students "transcribe" the story
for their buddy.
Procedures
One site that is very user
friendly is called Kids Space! This site accepts children stories in either
their own original format or students may choose to select a Rebus style
following a monthly form provided. In order to access this site, go to
the web site below and follow teacher instructions:
http://www.kids-space.org/forms/story/formSC_original.html
http://www.kids-space.org/forms/story/formSC_month.html
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Prior to the writing activity,
examine the components of story by looking at a variety of examples from
your classroom literature sets, myths or favorite authors.
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Verify that all students have
permission to access the Internet based on district guidelines
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Three to five days before the
lesson go to and submit the Class Story Entry Form at the URL above. Follow
the teacher registration instructions. You will receive a password via
e-mail within a few days under which you will submit your stories.
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Before going to the computer lab,
instruct students in Internet safety. Advise students Not to give out their
own email addresses but to use a school or the teacher’s email account.
Student directions/procedures
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Have students log onto www.kids-space.org/forms/story/formSC_month.html
(If this can be bookmarked on the computers prior to use it will greatly
simplify matters). Have students access the Internet.
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Have students enter their class
password.
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Students will name the icons presented
in their monthly story. They can choose any name for an icon.
Instruct the class that they will write a story using these icons.
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Students who choose not to use
the Rebus story form are encouraged to write their own narrative according
to class theme or guidelines using Original story class form at KidsSpace.
Submitting stories to school web page or alternative writing web pages
may be pursued.
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A rubric written specifically
for this assignment and based on Six Traits of Writing is available at
the following link- http://rubistar.4teachers.org/view_rubric.php3?id=514419
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Students (following district guidelines)
may send their story via e-mail to a friend or relative.
Assessment
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Students will complete a story
using the six traits writing rubric as an evaluation guide.
Teachers may create a slip
of paper that looks like the one below (or create a stamp):
Six-Trait Scoring Rubric
Ideas
_______ Word
Choice _______
Organization
_______ Fluency
_______
Voice
_______
Conventions _______
Students will submit their
story to either our school web page for publication and/or to a dedicated
student- publishing site such as www.kids-space.org/guide/storyH.html
Students will print a hard
copy for the teacher and submit it to the writing basket.
Teacher Name:
Greg Matchett
Site:
Walker
Date Submitted:
November 12, 2002